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:iconmyindigosky:
MyIndigoSky Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
from the thumbnail versions i like version 2 better because of picture flow, but i much prefer the colouring of version one...
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:iconwickt:
Wickt Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012
Great coloring omg. This is great, and I like this version more for some reason =]
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:iconhalsurfer:
HALsurfer Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Just to give this one the heart it deserves!
I wrote my comment to both under v2.
=^.^=
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:iconnihao93:
nihao93 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012
I love your art, but this time I need to say that the left leg kinda seems strange. But as always good job :)
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:iconargus-952:
ARGUS-952 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful.
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:iconrennessance:
Rennessance Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you should put the two picture beside each other then right do spot ask everyone to spot the difference if you haven't already done that
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Rennessance Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
it was a malfunction with computer that why there 3
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:iconmistakendestiny:
mistakendestiny Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012
this one.
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:icontheendofmyworld:
theendofmyworld Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Student General Artist
this one is more dynamic and gives her a more powerful posture. the other one is girly and cute. but both of them look good. it just depends on what you are going for
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:iconivanesca:
ivanesca Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i like this one better.
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:iconsmiaa:
smiaa Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
version 1 version 1 version 1 version 1 version 1
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:iconiumba:
iumba Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Student General Artist
V1
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:iconshinkonokokoro:
ShinkonoKokoro Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like V1 better. Less stereotypical, more reaching? If that makes sense. Love the mood of the piece.
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:iconjobsicon:
Jobsicon Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
V1 =P
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:iconlulie:
Lulie Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I prefer this v1 much more because it's less stereotyped -- less typical girly manga, more 'cool' and life-affirming.
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:iconmrkilljoy:
MrKilljoy Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012
That, and her right leg looks a bit off somehow on v2, making it semi-obvious that it's a local edit rather than the 1st planned pose
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DJ-Zemar Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:O_o: Oh..my..gosh..
:heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart: It's amazing.. :love: :heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:
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:iconhelioseven:
HelioSeven Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The tie is what really puts it together for me, gotta give a slight edge to this one.
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:iconjuroo:
juroo Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this pose is better, in my humble opinion
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:iconliljoja:
Liljoja Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like this version better, it looks more like she is just about to leave the ground. Very dynamic :heart;
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:iconinnuo:
Innuo Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012
I prefer this one, her pose looks more human and comfortable. I mean, who really jumps like the other one? I would like to know.

But of course, girls are just there for teh sexy and if they have twisted bodies, so be it.

That said, the pose is a little boring compared with the other, I wouldn't mind seeing the furthest leg being bent to imply jumping/movement.
I think that would be the best of both worlds, a girl that actually looks human in a not-so-impossible pose.
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:iconrazi123:
Razi123 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Its very beautiful, but where's the rest of her hair?
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:iconrorelse:
Rorelse Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This one has better lighting on the shirt, and a stronger pose, but there's less detail on the legs than on the 2nd version.

For both pics, I'd say fix the left wing, looks way messy
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babygong Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012
I like this one, the bent knee on the other one is such a cliche pose. Plus I love how you can feel the stretch of the pose all the way to her toes in this one. It feels more dynamic. Both are incredible, though.
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Ines92 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Student General Artist
it's a way better version. have no idea why people prefer the other one. :p this one is well balanced and it doesn't draw out the attention from the hand and face
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elemental-heiress Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Student General Artist
I waaaay prefer this version. The bent knee is such a cliche and it takes away from picture, in my opinion. This seems a more realistic pose and balances the image out a lot.
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FKAwesome Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
i like this way better cause it's more balanced than the other one...
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:iconimfrancisco:
iMFrancisco Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012
I like this better than version 2, i feel as if the knee bending is often overdone but they are both incredible!
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BlAcKaT94 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow this is so wonderful and you can just see the motion!!! It's beautiful!!
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:iconokami-kiera:
Okami-Kiera Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Pose is way more dynamic and correct here, and I really love the sense of depth it gives!
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Keyshe54 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012   Traditional Artist
This is a very striking work, you skills in crafting both pieces are stunning, but this composition and pose holds me. There is power and strength in her and a lot of life. She is cute and graceful here but I am pulled in by her body language. She feel alive and is actually communicating to me, reaching out.
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CollidingComets Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think the pose makes more sense here. You can see that she's reaching all the way to her toes.
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:iconiizel:
iizel Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012
This one!
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MuNgI--01 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012
They're both great but I like the tones in v2 from the hair, to her clothes, and down to her leggings.. I feel like the greater contrast between light and dark really make the image pop plus I like the little tag/tie details in v2 but overall I think I like v1 more because the pose is more natural in my opinion and uncommon than v2.. I want to say that the pose in v2 with one leg up is pretty common (think superman) and I understand that the v2 pose gives an appealing stylized sense of flight but she's not in full flight and is more hovering right at the surface of the water and this pose grounds the figure nicely and retains the sense that she's flying.
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:iconmoieru:
Moieru Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012
this one! =)
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:iconepsilonya:
epsilonya Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist
I prefer this version, looks more professional, adult, than the other which reminds of sailor moons positions :P
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:iconkylerthemighty:
KylerTheMighty Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
This one is more relaxed. v2's pose is kinda awkward and a little stressful to look at.
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xtinyheartx Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
in this photo i can tell her chest is further out than v2...i think that helps emphasize her pose. +i feel like you have her shirt a warmer tone... i think i like the warmer tone better but it depends what kind of feeling you want this photo to have.

Also i like her skirt better this way for some reason. However her shoes/boots doesn't have that shiny-rubbery-leathery look as v2...in this photo her shoes/boots almost look like just socks.
+if her face was brighter like in v2...this pic wins all the way for me.

i think the changes that are so minute are important
(i like this one)
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:iconvelsen:
velsen Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Both versions are good but this one have a better shading and light effects.
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AurionPride Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012
So beautiful work :heart: Maybe draw her hair like wings? Instead of angel wings. You know, two ponytails dispelled so, that they resemble feathery wings.
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:iconmourlie:
Mourlie Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Student General Artist
This one's better.
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GodessFae Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Student General Artist
I like this one better- it has more tension and movement for me, I think. It speaks 'reaching' more and idk, it just feels better, I guess.
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:iconeirlude:
eirlude Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012
Both of them have their pros and cons *V*
I feel more comfortable with this pose, though.
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leelarungsun Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
very nice
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:iconwendytsq:
WendyTsq Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh god this is amazing and beauty *--------*
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:iconeyedraw:
Eyedraw Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I totally agree with Morgenstond. this one feels more balanced
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DeadCobra Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012
Very wonderful
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:iconmorgenstond:
Morgenstond Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
They are both wonderful, yet this one just feels more balanced and a less standard. I like how she is on her tiptoes reaching out eagerly to the viewer in honest. In the other one it just feels like her legs are making a more unnecessary movement, like she's trying too hard? Thats how i felt.
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cevier Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
it's really hard to say which I prefer... this one here has more depth and looks more original - the other pose is an often used standard pose. but on the other hand this pose here also looks more static and inactive. with one leg raised it looks like she is jumping/flying - with both legs hanging to the ground it looks like she is pushed or falling...
I think I like to see her active and therefore would use version 2...
maybe there is some kind of mix of both poses? =/
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Toramiyo Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
there are things i like about both. what if you combined the two? the grounded nature of her left leg in this one, plus the playfulness of the right leg in the other version. that way you keep the depth of field and the strength of the stance without losing the free movement or playfulness of the pose.

combining the two will also make it seem like she's flying toward you instead of falling back in V2. currently in V1 she looks like she's in that hovering state after bursting through the clouds, though it looks like the movement is headed for the upper right and its slightly distracting from her visual focus. sort of like clashing visual focal points since at least to me it seems her body movement vs her eye focus is clashing.

i also think the coloring in this one is MUCH better (though she's missing her pigtails!)
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