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I corrected a few things and changed a few things .

Something I'm working on, critics r welcomed, I think there's still things that could be unproved or corrected : )Let me know !


Sketched with opencanvas 4.03

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~Moiis May 27, 2009, 4:42:52 PM
*Cant wait to see it finished* x3

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~ThatGirl2 May 27, 2009, 4:45:27 PM
the hand holding the tea cup looks a bit off, but other than that it looks awesome =]

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~Archonzero May 27, 2009, 4:48:58 PM
Looks great so far. Though I will suggest something to help it in a compositional format. Something I'm sure many others may agree with.

The visual weight of the piece so far is all to one the right side, which from a graphic design/compositional format will hurt the overall piece as it draws the eye to focus purely on figure and then towards the right border (ie swords) and drift away from the character itself.

Unless you plan to add something with dynamic visual weight to the left half of the image, then please forgive my observation/musings. It's something I learned in my visual art an design class and thought I'd point out before you're finished.

Looking forward to the finished piece! :)
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~skeletorbeing May 27, 2009, 4:50:14 PM
SmexY

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~EmbryH May 27, 2009, 4:52:18 PM
looks sexy so far. lol keep it up. Looks great ^^

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Mood: Joy =Mama-chan May 27, 2009, 4:52:51 PM
This is pretty awesome!

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*swimninja May 27, 2009, 4:53:04 PM
The foot looks a little off :shrug: not much, but the angle of the foot and the fall of the fabric seem off a bit. :hmm: I'm eager to see it finished! :D Looks very cool!

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~KawiiGirl May 27, 2009, 4:54:22 PM
Looks great already :D

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=Krad-Eelav May 27, 2009, 4:56:29 PM
The head might be a tad bit small for the body - but srsly, this is amazing. Love love love love the way he looks. <3

This would make for an excellent wallpaper with the blank space, otherwise you might want to fill it up. :)

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