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Death Note duo by =sakimichan:iconsakimichan:

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Wip of DN poster , Thanks for all the critics ! it really helps .

used: opencanvas 4.03

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:icondiane-butler:
*diane-butler Apr 22, 2009, 1:40:32 PM
Looks great! Only thing I can see is maybe the positioning of Light's arms make him look a little stiff >_>

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:icondemon-saiyajin:
~Demon-Saiyajin Apr 22, 2009, 1:40:55 PM
Really good! o:

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=galidorthedragon Apr 22, 2009, 1:42:02 PM
My crit would be that Light has a small head XD well that's all, I like the overall image,it looks great already, I like the expressions very much ^^

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:icondmr-elk:
~DMR-ELK Apr 22, 2009, 1:45:35 PM
mm I'd say to add more deformation to the armchair, specially where the black haired boy is sitting, there's more pressure implied C: and I agree with before me posts, but the concept and the composition is nice ^^

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*Vaelyane Apr 22, 2009, 1:46:48 PM
Light's torso is a bit too long, I'd say. >.>

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=BakayaroManiac Apr 22, 2009, 1:48:40 PM
Since I've been tortured with three straight days of hardcore hand anatomy, I must mention that Lights wrists need a bit more work on them. They're not so visible at all really, so the bend comes off a bit too stiff.

And uh, keep an eye on the fingers on Lights left hand (not our left, but his left :3)

Otherwise it looks really nice, perspective seems consistent and the couch is looking good too.

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:icongracie-is-a-pie:
~gracie-is-a-pie Apr 22, 2009, 1:50:06 PM
Hmm.. I'm not too great with anatomy, so this may be inaccurate, but their legs look a bit long o.o
It looks awesome, btw x3

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:iconrayviathae:
~Rayviathae Apr 22, 2009, 1:50:59 PM
I love it. The only thing I'd work on is the hand that's holding a paper or a booklet or something up so it can be read...people don't tend to hold like that with their fingers straight. Also, have the couch look like it's sunk down a bit under their weight, otherwise it looks unreal. But other than that - this is fabulous.

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:iconvictoria-smith:
~Victoria-Smith Apr 22, 2009, 1:51:04 PM
Light looks really stiff. You might want to reposition his chained arm and lower his shoulders just a bit. Other then that, I think it's beautiful ^^

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~SiriusC Apr 22, 2009, 1:51:10 PM
I'm not that good in anatomy but. Light's torso's too long.
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