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Death Note chronicale -fixed- by sakimichan Death Note chronicale -fixed- by sakimichan
-updated fixed up light's body , refined their faces a bit : )

Finally finished ,enjoy everyone.
Featuring Light and L xD
I'll be selling posters when I have them printed : )


Used: opencanvas 4.03+photoshopCS +Painter X
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:iconbroken-wing-angel:
Sorry I'm critiqueing again. It's just that you're the only artist I watch that asks for critique! And I love critiqueing!

The folds on the clothing really make this a stand out piece. Your technique makes them look real but somehow.... painted with a pallet knife or really thick watercolours. The same goes for the feathers as well.

They're hair is beautiful, highly detailed... almost photographic! The double light on the hair is a wondrous effect too.

But, on L the light coming from the middle is a lot better represented than the blue from the outside. Its the same for Light but his red outside lighting is better done than the middle light.

Not only that but, something is off with the faces too. They are good on their own but the seem too small for their heads. And Light seems to not have enough chin.

The apple looks a little flat too but that might be because of the watermark.

The Death note and the ribbon on the sythe are fabulous.

Continue to do awesome artwork!
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I'm sure I don't have to say this but this piece is wonderfully done. What I love the most out of this piece would be their pants, I kid you not. The folds are where they should be and are nicely defined.

While this is gorgeous, there are a few things I would like to suggest.

Something that I noticed is that Light's body area looks rather soft compared to his face. It doesn't look like there aren't any dark shadows in his body like there are in the face. Maybe add some darker tones in there, it will also help define some of his muscle features a bit more.

One other thing with his skin is that it looks like his face and body have two different skin tones. His body has a little warmer skin tone than his face.

The necklace with the three beads that Light is wearing, while it is nice, it seems like it doesn't necessarily need to be there. It's a little hard to notice at this moment. Darkening the chain/string and adding some darker shadows may help bring out that necklace more.

Also, with Light, his wing looks darker than L's. Maybe brighten that up so it matches with L's or so that it looks more noticeable. It also looks like it's blending in with the wall too.

The blue glow around L is a nice touch. Really shows out his angelic side. Also the two light sources must have been hard to work with, but you made it look like it was a piece of cake (which I'm sure L would enjoy ;)). What's great is that the yellow is a very nice golden color and it's easy on the eyes.

Overall this is still a wonderful piece of artwork. I was going to suggest the apple and their faces, but it seems like someone else has mention them so I won't say anything.
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JoAnNaLvArEz Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
creazione perfetta Deep Red Hearts - Free To Use
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:iconadohr:
Adohr Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2015
Light is hawt!
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Cutekitty2424 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2015  Student General Artist
I know this was quite a few years ago but I think this is still awesome! One of the best Death Note fan arts I have seen!
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:iconforgottenheroine:
ForgottenHeroine Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2015
oh my gosh....<3
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:iconkushinausagi:
KushinaUsagi Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015
Amazing work! :o (Eek) 
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:iconfallen-angel488:
fallen-angel488 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2015
Wow that's really beautiful 
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:iconbluiplier:
bluiplier Featured By Owner May 29, 2015  Hobbyist
i want a poster ; v;;
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:icon666-sina-666:
666-Sina-666 Featured By Owner May 28, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I really want a poster of this xD When you have them printed I can maybe get one.
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:iconhyrulian2816:
Hyrulian2816 Featured By Owner May 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
nose bleed 
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:iconapoorlittleduck:
APoorLittleDuck Featured By Owner May 6, 2015
So great !!! But L doesn't have eyebrows XD Yes that's a thing
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:iconlegendozelda:
LegendoZelda Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2015
L-chan~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! La la la la 
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:iconfluffylemonreader:
FluffyLemonReader Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Can I have both? If not then I choose L
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:iconpencilkirito:
PencilKirito Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
This picture is amazing. And L is the best.
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:iconjayfeatherxstick1234:
JayfeatherXStick1234 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2015  Student
Uoh boy.... can i has both???
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:iconsampea:
sampea Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2015
I choose L's side! Amaing picture!
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:iconnicool3:
Nicool3 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow
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:iconlawave:
LaWave Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Can simply imagine how many fanfics and Yaoi djs are made because of this photo? XD
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:icononceinanightsky:
OnceInANightSky Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2015
L looks hot!
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:iconnightmare-curse:
Nightmare-Curse Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thiiiiiis is awesooooome
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:iconmoonshade10:
moonshade10 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2015
OMG!!! I never realized u made this pic!!!! I love it!!
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:iconphaesri:
Phaesri Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love that apple ;)

Ad of course I ADORE everything else as well /)^O^(\
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:iconmasterassassinezio:
MasterAssassinEzio Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2015
L doesn't have eyebrows
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:icondawnflower8:
dawnflower8 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2015  Student General Artist
This has to be one of the best Death Note fanarts I've seen.
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:iconbeyound666:
Beyound666 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
how much do you want for a posters have?
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:iconfabrja13:
Fabrja13 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2015
Love the Deathnote series and this art is simply amazing well done sir
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giselsonamy4ever Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2015  Professional Writer
OMG Light and L *v*
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DanielV191193 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015
¿Dante? ¿In Death Note?. D:
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:icondina-soar:
Dina-soar Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2015
I just love this!! :D
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:iconrashuvast:
rashuvast Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*Free Icon/Emote* Molang (I Love It!) 
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:icongothica413:
gothica413 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2015  Student Digital Artist
bootyful
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SilverPlusMMD Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2015  Hobbyist
Beautiful! :clap:
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:iconsabakunoino:
SabakuNoIno Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
holy shit you are amazing...
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:iconkhainsaw:
Khainsaw Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2015  Professional General Artist
HOLY SHITTTTTTT SO HOTTTT
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:iconbeegbot:
Beegbot Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2015  Student General Artist
too perfect!!
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:icon0lexdelapp:
0lexdelapp Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
YESS
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:iconqueenfirelily17:
queenfirelily17 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
THE BAES
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:iconwendyhamletdoodles:
WendyHamletdoodles Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Stuuuuuuuunning! I adore it, it's amazing
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:iconunowhoownsart:
UNoWhoOwnsArt Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
I'm a fan of Light, but dang, L looks really good in this picture. 
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:iconkawaii-dark-lord:
Kawaii-Dark-Lord Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
They look like Dante and Vergil (from DmC)
but still Awesome!!!!
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:iconjosuekun94:
josuekun94 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow nice Neko Emoji-42 (Kawaii Moe Smile) [V3] 
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:iconnermal408:
nermal408 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014
Amazing!
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:iconhanariblue:
HanariBlue Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Omg L! :heart: :faint: This is amazing! :omg:
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:iconretrorockgirl:
RetroRockGirl Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
THIS. IS. BREATHTAKING.
I love it! Your paintings are awesomeeee! 
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DJJ1172 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2014
OH MY GOD THIS IS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconananyaarts:
AnanyaArts Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
HOT!!!
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:iconmangamaster237:
mangamaster237 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2014
this is beautiful art work that i cannot even come close to. i think the detail complements the characters very well. you work very well with lighting. it very hard for me to find mistakes in this amazing art work. you inspire me to keep drawing. keep up the good work.  i hope to see more of your work soon.
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Possible15 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
L looks the best in my opinion. I like how you centered the Death Note between good and evil :)
It seems Light became Shinigami...O_O
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:iconhsb12345:
hsb12345 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2014  Student Filmographer
you have my blessing
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GageTheAssasin Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2014  Student General Artist
OMG THIS IS AMAZING! Can I use this idea for a drawing?
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martpoke Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
just... awesome. great work!!!
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